NEHS announces “Love” writing contest winners
May 8, 2017
In honor of Valentine’s Day, McLean’s chapter of the National English Honor Society (NEHS) held a writing contest, accepting submissions of poems and short stories centered around the theme, “Love.” Honor society members read through all the submissions and picked two winning poems and one winning short story. NEHS recently announced the winning entries, which are printed below.
The winning poems were “Diet,” by junior Seyun Kim and “The Crutch and the Crutched,” by junior Annie Przypyszny. The short story, “Just Rocks,” was written by Junior Abby Comey.
Diet
Seyun Kim
I thought that I could live
Without seeing you
Without feeling you
I thought a month without you would be durable
That a week would be fine
That a day would be nothing
I thought I could forget you
by covering my eyes
by holding my nose
But look at me now
Desperate to see you, I grab my phone to call you.
I don’t need your number,
my finger remembers your number
Now I sit in front of the door, waiting
But soon stand up with impatience
I walk up and down the corridor with my eyes fixed at the door
From faraway, I hear the footsteps
It gets closer, closer and closer
And stops in front of my door
With relief, I wide open the door.
“Pepperoni medium, right?”
The Crutch and the Crutched
Annie Przypyszny
I sometimes look into his eyes to find a cataract
Some sort of reason that he stays
But all I see is clear blue crystals
And red veins
More than he had when we first met
Until I came
And poured all my soap into them
He’s had to throw away so many towels since I’ve moved in
He can remove the stains
But not the memories he associates them with
He says it’s okay
He likes getting new ones anyway
They’re always more plush
I know it’s not fair for him
I know it takes so much for him
To tilt his vertical line
To find itself parallel to my diagonal one
It puts a strain on his neck
And his spine
And I know it’s only a matter of time
Before he snaps
All I do is snap things
Like a crayon I can’t help it
Unless I don’t use the crayon at all
I try to give so much
But I take so much more
I give him my hands and my hips
And my words and my sighs
But I violently steal all the tears from his eyes
And I drag on his shoulder
Until it dislocates
I try to put it back
I do that much
But it’s not stepping above and beyond
To undo what you’ve already done
Sometimes I think of trains
How far away they go
How many different tracks I could follow
Maybe if I started to travel their path
He could move onto find a duchess
Instead of settling for a psychopath
The Crutch
It kills me to see her with bricks on her back
I try to remove them
But she insists that she keep them
I only wish she knew
That we could share them
But she keeps them all to herself
And so I’m starting to pile bricks of my own onto myself
She’s my flower
But she won’t let me water her
She’s my bird but she won’t let me feed her from the palm of my hand
I promise her I lose nothing from her opening
But I lose everything from her closing
When a cave is unsealed
You might find bats and beetles
But you also find treasure
And minerals
Keep the cave sealed
And you get neither
She thinks she weighs me down
But a minute on the ground
Is a small price to pay
For getting to visit the stars
At least once a day
She’s shown me new horizons
New galaxies
That I never believed in
But now I do
But everytime I touch her skin
It’s like she thinks she’ll infect me
She won’t believe me
When I tell her I have immunity
She wishes to be locked away in quarantine
The Crutched
Another wave has crashed on the shore
And he’s found himself amidst the froth
I wish I could be a tidal pool
Instead of an ocean
Maybe I wouldn’t risk drowning so many people
I don’t want his lungs immersed in fluid
I want to undo it
But the tide can’t rewind itself
And I can feel another storm ahead already
And it hurts me to see him trying to stay so steady
He’s been my clarity for too long
But soon enough I’ll start blurring his vision
I don’t want him to suffer with me
I want him to feel free
Not chained to my side
Always waiting to do my bidding
He tells me that he’s fine
But I know his ship is sinking
He’s missed three days of work already
He’s slicing off his limbs to replace mine
And what kills me is
I’m letting him
I don’t want to
But I hold onto him
I’ve cemented his hand to my forehead
I’ve tangled our muscles together
My reliance on his guidance
Is suffocating him
I need to let go
I need him out
Before I drop my torch in the gasoline
And the flames consume him
I’m the one who lit it in the first place
Let them burn me
And only me
The Crutch
She latches onto me
Unwillingly
But how can I tell her I don’t mind being
Caught in her grip
Anything to make it so she doesn’t slip
She’s thinks she’s holding onto me
But sometimes I feel like I’m holding onto her
And besides, I was planning on going back to work tomorrow
So that’s not even the issue here
She’s a sandcastle
And she’s eroded a bit
But I can build her back up
If she’d just let me touch her
Every night she sleeps at the edge of the bed
And all I want is to hold her
She won’t allow me to extinguish her fire when she’s burning
Or strike her match when she’s in the dark
She insists on doing it herself
With no hose
And no matches
And yet she still thinks she latches
Onto me too much
She’s scared of dependence
So she builds a bubble of static around her body
So all who lay their hands on her are shocked
She’s so careful when she talks
When she feels the vomit rising in her throat
She swallows it
And I just want her to let it out
I’ll clean it up
It will only take another towel
And I don’t mind buying more
I like it when they’re new and plush
No one expects someone to move when all their bones are broken
No one expects someone to talk when their tongue has been cut out
No one expects perfection from anyone
Except for her
With herself
And I want to tell her
So badly
She’s already perfect
Because she’s made it this far
The Crutched
I like looking out the window of the train
I wish I could see the tracks
But they’re at a stubborn angle
That keeps them from entering my view
But I still try to sight them
Because it’s the only thing keeping me from thinking of him
He’s better off now
He probably sighed with relief
And went back to work
And set off fireworks
Red ones
His favorite color
A color I disliked
He’s now free to do whatever he likes
Without having my leash wrapped around his wrist
With me always tugging him back from his destination
He no longer has to sell his hours for me
Hours of me waking him up in the middle of the night
Hours he could have spent dreaming
Instead of hearing me screaming
And he can find another now
Someone with hair softer than mine
A stomach flatter than mine
Arms cleaner than mine
Anything better than mine
Someone blows balloons for him
Instead of popping them
And I will no longer need him
I don’t need a soft cushion for when I fall
Because it’s time to start getting used to what it feels like
To fall on solid marble
Time to let my wounds get infected
Instead of always having clean bandages nearby
It’s time for me to give blood
Instead of drinking it
I will no longer let him soothe me
I will no longer let him be my crutch
The Crutch
I wish I could have had one more morning with her
Smelled her sour breath
Brushed my teeth while she showered
Tasted the orange juice on her tongue
Cupped my hands around her jaw
And stroke her cheeks with my thumb
I wish I could have had more than one more morning
I wish I could have had every morning
But now I’ll have no mornings
Unless she comes back
Maybe she’ll be back
I’ll hold her so tight that her ribs snap
And I’ll polish her like silver
Where did she go
To her brother?
To another man like me?
Is her soul still in her body?
I can’t think right
I feel like my saliva is made of mercury
My mouth feels heavy
My throat feels like it’s closing
I can still see the indentation from her head in the pillow
So far to the edge
I tried so hard to get it closer
Maybe I could have
But she never gave me a chance
I hope she will give someone a chance
Someday
They deserve it
She deserves it
I wish I was plugging in the telephone keys for her
Calling in sick to take care of her
But now there’s no one to take care of
But myself
But she took such good care of me
She gave me someone to take care of myself for
But she’s gone
And she’ll never know
She’ll never see
That she was my crutch
Just Rocks
Abby Comey
I fell in love with a girl who wore rain boots on sunny days. There isn’t much need for bright
colored rain boots in Albuquerque, New Mexico, but Jane would have looked lost without the
sun shining off of her legs on a June afternoon.
I should mention that I loathe pet stores. I hate the way that helpless hamsters and
goldfish stare at you with big eyes from behind the glass as you pass. I hate the way it smells like
processed meats and cheap air freshener. I hate when people bring their dogs into the store, as
though Scruffy is going to point his paw at his favorite Beneful formula for you. I should also
mention that I don’t actually have a pet, so you would think there wouldn’t be any possible
reason for me to find myself in a damned pet store. You would be wrong if you thought that,
because Jane Chung works at Petco and her rain boots glisten to a blinding degree beneath the
store’s fluorescent lights.
Jane’s rain boots were blue, just like her hair-covered smock, on the day I found out she worked
at Petco. I was cat-sitting for my neighbor, a task I dreaded but decided to weather because my
Mount Rushmore funds were dwindling after the Christmas season. Yes, my dream is to visit
Mount Rushmore the summer before I go to college. Not Europe or Disney World or New York
City, but the glamorous Keystone, South Dakota. There’s something achingly poetic to me about
carving historic faces into the face of a natural wonder and I want to look those stoic men in the
faces. But in the meantime, I opt for store brand soda and watch over smelly orange cats.
I could almost feel the fates of love smiling upon me when I found Jane knelt down by
the cat litter, her dark braids sweeping the floor as she applied price tags with shocking deftness.
“Oh hey, Travis,” she said and the sound of my name on her lips tasted to me like cherry
coke.
“I’m good, how are you?”
I blew it. That’s it. Here was my opportunity and there is was flying away in the wind.
Jane just smiled and when she did I feared I might blow away with it.
“I’m doing just fine.” And then she was gone, leaving behind nothing but a two-for- one
sticker on some scented cat litter.
“Hey! Hey, Jane! Wait,” I called after her. She turned around and I cleared my throat,
“Uh, which, uh, cat litter would you recommend?”
“Well, what kind of cat are we talking about here,” she said, her green nail polish
flashing as she brought a hand to her hip.
“Just your average cat, I suppose. If you want to get specific- orange, fat, smelly,
diabolical.” She laughed at that. She laughed! She laughed and for a moment her brown eyes
looked the color of her nail polish in the light.
“Purple package, bottom shelf. It’s a little more expensive than the others but it smells
great and there’s a special.”
“Oh,” I stammered, “thanks. Got it. My neighbor’s cat will enjoy crapping in this
mysterious sand.” Oh sweet Jesus. Who am I? What have I become?
But then she laughed again and I was an instrument at her disposal, a pebble in her
smooth palm. I was hers. And then she was gone again, leaving me clutching that over-priced cat
litter with trembling arms.
Now, I’m sure you’re skeptical here. You’re probably thinking, but, Travis, you don’t even know
this girl. How did she possibly come to hold you like a pebble in her smooth palm? But I really
do know Jane. She is strong and gentle, wielding her powerful existence with a tender
thoughtfulness. I’ve watched her reach out to the lonely and leave heavy stones unturned because
she sees the world through a lavender lense. She has the courage to live out loud and do so
unapologetically. And my quiet soul can only sit and watch her paint the world lavender,
following desperately behind her rain boot prints in the dirt.
I’ve often pondered why Jane Chung wears rain boots every day in a town where it never
rains. People at school have their theories. I heard she has warts on her ankles, kids whisper, my
cousin told me her uncle runs a rain boot factory and she can’t afford anything else. I think she’s
letting the world know she’s ready for any storm it throws at her. I think she knows that storms
don’t always disguise themselves as rain. I think her life is full of puddles and lightning strikes
and wind that threatens to knock you off of your feet, but I think Jane Chung says let the clouds
come. I’ll be standing here, boots in the dirt. Let them try.
Mrs. McCormick’s house smelled like the pet store and looked like a hospital waiting room.
There were ancient magazines on every coffee table and plastic plants in every corner. There
were generic photos of cityscapes and laughing children hanging on the tacky, geometric
wallpaper. All that was missing was a reception desk and a frantic mother with a toothless son
clutching a broken skateboard by her side.
Joe, the orange, fat, smelly, diabolical cat was perched on the kitchen table when I
arrived and he gave me a glare as though I had just eaten his children in front of him. Joe is
named after Mrs. McCormick’s late husband, a heartwarming memorial if I ever did see one.
When I die, I hope I have a hamster named after me. Hospital wings and gardens are overrated.
Give me something that craps on the floor. That’s what I’m talking about.
Before heading home, I fed Joe and changed his litter box. If you’ve never changed a
litter box before, it’s like the least fun treasure hunt you’ve ever had. It’s like digging for the last
few raisins in a box of Raisin Bran, except instead of raisins, it’s cat poop.
When I reached my house I saw blue rain boots dangling off of the front porch railing
and my knees shook fiercely.
“Travis,” Jane said and this time it tasted like sour milk when her dark eyes met mine.
Her voice was low and hoarse and scared.
“Jane?” I asked, “What are you doing here?”
“I’m sorry, Travis, I’m sorry. I don’t know why I came. I shouldn’t have. But I saw you
at work and you were just so nice, so normal and I needed to talk to someone, someone who
wouldn’t look at me like I’m some sort of freak. I just needed to not be alone for a moment. I
don’t know. I shouldn’t have come. I’m-”
“No,” I said, a little too forcefully, “no. Come inside. We can go see Joe later if you
want.”
“Who’s Joe?” she asked as we walked inside.
“Nevermind.”
Jane took off her boots in the front hall and I realized it was the first time I had seen her
without them on. She was still wearing her hair-covered smock and her braids were coming loose
around her neck. Her socks were gray and too big and she looked so small standing there before
me, like a child who’d had a nightmare.
“Can I get you some water or anything. My mom made apple pie last night, so I could-”
“I don’t have any friends, Travis.”
“What?”
“I don’t have any friends. I scare people I think. I don’t know. But I’m tired. I’m tired of
having no one to talk to, to laugh with. My parents don’t talk to me. I don’t have any siblings. I
don’t even have a smelly cat to talk to, Travis, and I’m suffocating. The world just feels so big
and I feel so small and it’s only going to get worse after high school and I don’t know if I can
take it. There’s something wrong with me or something, I don’t know. Everything just feels
wrong to me. Nothing fits right, not clothes or people or colors or anything.” When she finished
speaking she still stood in the same spot on the carpet and she hadn’t taken her eyes off of my
face.
“What are you talking about? You’re so- so smart and so kind. I don’t get it.” Jane shook
her head at that as she turned from me and sat on the couch. She tucked her gray socks
underneath her and hugged an embroidered pillow to her chest.
“No one likes me, Travis. People think I’m interesting, I guess, but no one wants to know
me, not really. I’m the kind of girl you talk about over smoothies, the kind of girl you ask where
she shops when you’re lab partners. I’m not the kind of girl you ask how she’s feeling. I’m not
and I don’t know how to fix it.”
“There’s nothing to fix, Jane.” I thought she was going to cry, but she didn’t. She just
looked at me. “Jane,” I asked, “why did you come here?”
“Because you took my advice on cat litter.” I laughed before she continued. “Because
you seemed to care what I had to say. You asked a question and then you listened to the answer.”
“I should’ve listened sooner,” I whispered. Jane let go of the pillow and turned to look at
me. Her eyes were tired and her skin didn’t have its usual glow. I’d never seen her like this
before, beaten down and broken. And yet I loved her in that instant. She was human at last. She
was real and her cracks looked more like embroidery to me. I wanted to reach out and touch her
weary cheek, but I didn’t. “Hey Jane?” I asked.
“Yeah?”
“Why do you wear rain boots?” She chuckled to herself and traced the seam of her sock
absentmindedly.
“In case it rains.” And then she asked me if she could have some pie.
Jane and I went to Mount Rushmore the summer after senior year. Her rain boots were gray to
honor their stoic expressions, she said. It was foggy on the day we arrived in Keystone and the
likenesses of Washington, Jefferson, Roosevelt, and Lincoln were hidden as mist overtook the
face of the mountain. Yet when we emerged from the gift shop before our departure, the fog had
at last cleared. We both looked for a long time before saying anything. The two of us just stood
there, her hand in mine, and we looked. I spoke first.
“They’re just rocks.”
Jane laughed at that and once again I felt my pestering pebble-ness overtake me as I
always did when her dark eyes lit up and her nose wrinkled so that she resembled a gentle sort of
tiger. I felt lucky to have gotten to memorize that laugh over the last few months. I felt lucky to
have gotten to bring her lips to mine and to know the way her waist feels in my hands. I felt
lucky to have touched her tears and to have shared in her triumphs. I felt lucky to be standing
there beside her in that moment.
“Yeah. I guess they are just rocks,” she said.
“I’ve been seeing the world through a lavender lense, Jane.”
“What?”
“I’ve been seeing the world through a lavender lense,” I repeated, “They’re just rocks.
You’re just a girl. I’m just the lucky dweeb who gets to love you.”
“They’re just rocks,” she said, nodding.
“And that’s a beautiful thing, Jane,” I said, holding her hand a little tighter, “that’s a
beautiful thing.”